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©2005-2009 ~ArtificialSmile
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Well, here it is, the promo for Artificial Smile (it took me god knows how long to do those wings)

After I get done with the cover, I'll start on the pages. Thankfully, the cover shouldn't be as bad as the promo (I will not make the feathers too small, that's what did me in on the promo.

ANy suggestions to improve the pic would be great. Thanks. ^^

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Oooh! Love this! =D Shoujo ai is the best <3 And yaoi.....and a bit of het and............

Anyway.

You want suggestions? =D Okay, I can only think of three things;

1- You should probably resize the picture so that it is a bit smaller, or maybe get someone else to do it for you.

2- And I also recommend keeping the hair colour within the drawn lines- It makes it look more professional.

3- Lastly, I think you should link all the pages to each other as well =D

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